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Re: The Cracks
Yeah, "nigger" really is a dirty word, and I hate it, and I assure you, I was using it in what may be the only appropriate sense that I, a ...
Apr 4, 2006 -
Re: The Cracks
Indeed, I loath you.
Apr 4, 2006 -
Re: A Prayer to Allah
We don't understand the world, but wise men understand God, they become God. The world, that's quite a different matter. Wise men aren't vengeful. Unwise men are. God isn't vengeful, ...
Apr 3, 2006 -
Re: The Cracks
Mmm. It was forced at first, then I got into the rhythm of it. Mulled that bit over for a few days, too. I needed to end on a good ...
Apr 3, 2006 -
Re: I love you mother.
Damn your sweet lips and autobiographic stories!
Apr 3, 2006 -
Re: avalanche
The first stanza was quite wonderful. Liked the rest of the poem, too, but I love the first stanza. I really like the pacing, too, with the * thing. Good ...
Apr 3, 2006 -
Re: Turning coffee into Wine
There was really some fantastic language in there. A lot of it. Yet I had difficulty reading lots of ways, it dragged as I read it. Use that data as ...
Apr 3, 2006 -
Re: graveyards and roses (me and you)
quite lovely. I can't see any easy way it could be better, nor do I want to look. I really enjoyed it.
Apr 3, 2006 -
Re: I love you mother.
Without a doubt, the best story I have read in my entire life.
Apr 2, 2006 -
Re: A Prayer to Allah
I agree, and Psylynx is dead, so it doesn't matter what he thinks.
Apr 2, 2006
